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我是谁 发表于 2006-7-14 14:12

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&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [color=#7fffd4] &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [/color][font=Tahoma] 愁&泪[/font]<br /><br /> <br /><br /> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [font=Verdana] &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;[color=#0000ff] 雨夜愁,愁满天,点点闪烁,知我心.举酒浇愁,抽上更愁. &nbsp; [/font][/color]<br /><br /> &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;[color=#0000ff] &nbsp; [font=Arial] &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; 泪如雨,盈满眶,月色撩人,别伤情.独倚杨柳,泪洒秋波. &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; [/font][/color]<br /><br />

无言自倚修 发表于 2006-7-17 15:08

怎一个愁字了得....

孙一笑 发表于 2006-10-1 22:59

是不是大家觉得写诗就等于写古诗啊```

张敏 发表于 2006-10-2 07:39

[quote][i][b]下面引用由[u]孙一笑[/u]在 [i]2006-10-01 22:59[/i] 发表的内容：[/b][/i]<br />是不是大家觉得写诗就等于写古诗啊```[/quote]<br />似乎写古体诗更屌。。。。:stupid:

liiukou 发表于 2007-1-2 10:57

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&nbsp; &nbsp; 风中舞，舞上心，曲曲相连，相伴我，借舞示欢，与君同欢。<br />事随风，飘离去，香玉仅存，犹相伴，登高远眺，佳人同在

北卫基滩 发表于 2007-1-3 16:21

<P>[quote]<EM><STRONG>下面引用由<U>张敏</U>在 <EM>2006-10-02 07:39</EM> 发表的内容：</STRONG></EM><BR><BR>似乎写古体诗更屌。。。。:stupid:[/quote]<BR><BR>完全不是更屌吧..</P><P>在我看来,写这种其实更有偷懒的嫌疑..<BR>而且生造的迹象也是越演越烈...</P>

梦de精灵 发表于 2007-3-23 22:33

每个人都有属于自己的想法,古或今,都是诗,不同的只是形式,同的是魂,每一首诗都应该有自己的灵魂!

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